If you’re going to try and convince people, you first have to learn how to write intelligently and correctly.
Lesson #1: the difference between their, there, and they’re.
Their: refers to something that belongs to a person
ex: That is THEIR home.
They’re: the conjugation of the words “they” and “are”.
ex: THEY’RE coming to get us.
There: refers to a place
ex: I went THERE last summer.
Every single time you meant to write “they’re” you wrote “their” instead.
In my opinion, your inability to write properly makes you lose all credibility.